It starts our with the brothers fishing together. This was heartwarming, because you don't normally see that these days. There was a glossary of names with pronunciation which helped so you could read a name without spending a lot of time trying.
I thought the writing flowed very well. The descriptions of the settings and characters was extremely well done. "Smell of baking bread wafted enticingly down the hill" You could almost smell and taste that bread. Fantastic description.
When Godwin wiped her brow with a flour covered hand. Can't you just see the flour on her brow? The book definitely was a page turner. Magic mixed with fantasy made a fantastic read. This was just part of the book. Can't wait to read entire book. The book was very well written, great flow and plot was easy to follow.
In the part of Paradise Found, the last line "THIS IS NOT A GAME!"
This makes you want more, much more. This is a must read.
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Publish it! Can't wait to read the rest.